Thursday, October 11, 2018

Week 7B

In class today we had the final critique for our websites. This is the feedback that I was given on my website.

  • Testimony Section
    • The graphics I use to represent the different people that I was quoting were too rough and simple. I could have used actual stock photos of people or maybe made my icons a little more detailed with more than just two colors.
  • Peak and Flow Logo
    • Rob thought that the logo at the top of the website was too bright and hard to read. Maybe I could have had more contrast between the logo and the background because they were similar in color. 
  • Activewear Images
    • I could have incorporated some sort of design into the edge of the box that I put the photos in. Maybe I could have used the Peak and Flow logo to break the edge of the images. 
  • Footer
    • Instead of just using trees in the footer I could have added people running along with the trees. The trees felt slightly Christmasy. The tree part of the footer also did not resize properly with the rest of the website. The grass part below the trees would disappear when you resized the website.

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